Chance gives way to works of art (In this case, the art is writing).
The Depressing Not-So-Welcome Welcome Note
While reading this page, you might get offended, confused or simply wondering why you are on this page. I urge you to just read the stories and review, only and only if you can review constructively or you can give helpful suggestions.
Thursday, April 21, 2011
Edit! Thanks to a spur of the moment change, oneshots now come in pairs! Please feedback which oneshot you prefer for me to continue as a comment on this post preferably! Thank you lots lots! =D
-CerebrateBen
I cant decide which one is better. Its tough to compare given that they have been written using different styles. The diary consists of a lot more description and following of thought-lines, which makes it easier to kind of, follow closely. Whereas, for Team Serenity, its easier to get lost in the process of the story with lesser "personal opinions" throughout the story.I must say that the Diary one-shot is more informal. So I suppose I would suggest you continue that. :D
I prefer the diary. The storyline seems more interesting and easy to follow compared to Team Serenity. xD I admit, I somewhat dislike stories that don't quite explain what is happening and you have to figure out most of it from what you read. Team Serenity feels just like that kind of story. No offence! >.<
The diary because it flows better, and is more interesting to me! The other one is good too but I feel it's a little too stiff? So yes, I choose the diary!
I cant decide which one is better. Its tough to compare given that they have been written using different styles. The diary consists of a lot more description and following of thought-lines, which makes it easier to kind of, follow closely. Whereas, for Team Serenity, its easier to get lost in the process of the story with lesser "personal opinions" throughout the story.I must say that the Diary one-shot is more informal. So I suppose I would suggest you continue that. :D
ReplyDeleteI prefer the diary. The storyline seems more interesting and easy to follow compared to Team Serenity. xD I admit, I somewhat dislike stories that don't quite explain what is happening and you have to figure out most of it from what you read. Team Serenity feels just like that kind of story. No offence! >.<
ReplyDeleteThe diary because it flows better, and is more interesting to me! The other one is good too but I feel it's a little too stiff? So yes, I choose the diary!
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